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THE FACTORY

A PROSE POEM

By Jim Kittelberger

 

                               

That smell that permeated for miles around, a mixture of smoke, exhausts, and that slight aroma of something electrical burning, was an unmistakable beacon, an unneeded street sign that harkened all who would encroach upon these streets that you had entered the dedicated area that the factory dominated, lock, stock and people.  For indeed the people who populated the streets a mile hence and a mile yon were assets of the factory as if they were iron ore or coal. 

 

The factory that spread over six city blocks consumed raw materials and people twenty-four hours a day, its insatiable appetite never sated, never tired, never rested.  As its appetite increased, train tracks were laid to accommodate boxcars filled with more and more fodder pouring into the bottomless maw.  Conveyer belts sped the metal, the rubber, the glass, north, south, east, and west into every environ of the factory to be hammered, screwed, shaped, cut, shined, buffed, fitted, assembled into product by human beings rooted into one spot receiving, performing a task, moving it on; receiving, performing a task, moving it on; receiving, performing a task, moving it on and on and on until every muscle, every nerve, every part of the persons brain wishes to scream, STOP, I'm a person, I have an identity, I am someone.   But the factory doesn't care about your identity, your thoughts, your hopes, your fears.  They want product, product, product.  Do your task or move away to be replaced by another nameless raw material in the never-ending chain, in and out, in and out, faster, faster and faster.  Product is profit, more product means more profit.  A Christmas turkey and fifty dollars is yours if you hold on.  What about the wife and kids, the bills, the bills, the bills. 

 

Hands wrinkled, scarred, and aching reach for the gold watch as the speaker talks about the years of devotion to the factory.  Legs tired and arthritic struggle one last time through the factory saying good-bye to younger faces still not lined with worry, searching in vain for those he finally remembers went out before him.  Slowly, sadly, he struggles toward the exit one last time.  The factory has used him up, has taken all that he had to give and threw it onto the conveyor belt to be used along with the metal, the rubber, the glass, his sweat, his sinew, his spirit and converted it all into product. 

 

The weather is sweet, dispite the smell of the factory which is hardly recognizable to him anymore.  The rocking chair on the porch beckons him as he wearily lowers his used up body, sighs a little and soon dies. 

 

The factory sends its regrets, misspells his name, and states he was a fine man and is sure that his sons will live up to their fathers legacy at the factory.       Edit

AUTHORS NOTE:  I, of course, had a specific factory in mind when I conceived the piece.  I also had a grandfather and father who worked in that plant.  What their inner thoughts were, I have no idea.  They were an immigrant and the son of an immigrant, and as such voicing any such thoughts as I have fictionized would never have happened.  Other than that background, the whole piece is a work of fiction with apologies to those men and women who go happily into a plant each day and live happy lives.